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Re: I Liked the Way She Suffered
Posted: Mon Oct 19, 2009 7:26 pm
by adrian
NOOOOOOOOOOOO i can't afford a lawyer right now lol
man how close to his story did i get? like.. should i have this one deleted?
Re: I Liked the Way She Suffered
Posted: Mon Oct 19, 2009 7:31 pm
by Spookymufu
I'll have to read it and let you know 
Re: I Liked the Way She Suffered
Posted: Mon Oct 19, 2009 8:58 pm
by Murfreesboro
I would say it's more Poe-influenced than a "rip-off." I'm pretty sure the story about the man who is immured is "A Cask of Amontillado." Haven't read it in years, but I believe it's set during the Carnival, everyone in masks, and one man lures another one into his wine cellar to see a cask of this rare wine. For some reason the guy who does the luring wants the other one dead, and he ends up walling him up. I don't think he hears voices, though.
Actually, I enjoyed your macabre little poem/story. It set a mood.
Re: I Liked the Way She Suffered
Posted: Sun Oct 25, 2009 10:48 am
by Belladonna
I enjoyed this too.
Poe-esque but not a rip.
Nice creepy atmosphere, Adrian.
Re: I Liked the Way She Suffered
Posted: Sun Oct 25, 2009 4:26 pm
by ancient whitelighter
adrian wrote:NOOOOOOOOOOOO i can't afford a lawyer right now lol
man how close to his story did i get? like.. should i have this one deleted?
Well, Adrian...you're in luck since The Cask of Amontillado is in the public domain - no lawyer needed 